great poem... too bad i can't understand it
- it might help if you put the language that it is in on the top.
it was okay -though i do know my expectations are a little to high. (hey, we all can't be Charles Bukowski.)
It was a rythyming poem and i generly don't even go near them, and i was surprised that i didn't despise it, it had a messege in it. reminded me of Rould Dahl.