you have an excellent turn of phrase and rhythm. It brings life to old themes.
3rd fave, for the rambling madness of it, the 'linguistic trickery' (to quote a great man) , and the invigorating mix of self-loathing and general loathing that disintergrate the poetic voice into a stream of scornful statements.
2nd fave. cba to say why in detail: the rhymes ain't awkward, the emotion is honest and unsparing, the complexity simultaneously brushed underneath the carpet as the carpet is lifted.