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  • (2/26/2009 12:13:00 PM)

    Dreux, this, like the others in this series, is a great poem. You have a high level of skill, and you obviously have a grasp of the better classics. IMO (not that you asked) your talent surpasses a need to reference Olympian themes. The buzzing telephone image is fantastic, as is the ending and the majority of the piece, without the classical clutter. Just for fun, take out those lines and reread it. Is it stronger? Can it stand on its own depending on nothing but its language, syntax and ideas? I'm pretty sure it does.

    Who asked me. You seem to be building a collection on a theme, so go with it, but I hope you recognize your ability to let go of what writers used to do, and let your talent for language and expression stake its own claim. It can.
    Pleasure to read you.
    Cheers, Lori

  • (2/26/2009 11:54:00 AM)

    This rocks, Dreux. I haven't read your work in a long time; too long, but I'm glad you're still at it.
    Cheers,
    Lori

  • (12/16/2008 5:52:00 PM)

    Yes, this is up there with your best. Not sure if it's intended, but there's definitely some self-depricating humor that comes through that makes it really click.
    Just a thought, but would 'inner voice' be a good title? I can't resist but it's great either way.
    Cheers, Lori

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