This poem would be great if read in church. I believe it would make a beautiful prayer. It may even bring about some great awakening. You never know.
I'm sorry for your loss. It seems like Derrill must have been a very good person, probably even better than that. I think he would be proud.
Whoa.. I love it. Like they say, poetry does come from the depths of the heart. And this one speaks volumes. I mean...who really knows you? ? Do you even truly know yourself? ? I am a human being..not a super being.