every poem is a thought, two thoughts, three thoughts. there's not better or worst. i like this poem.
(but I talk like a candy-child)
this poem is very evocative. this is the spirit of the truth... ahem. good images, very good images. and the words run like water.
Really good, the truth is inside the poem and this is important.
Sorry, but my english is not good enough to say more things...