this poem sounded very desperate. I hope you have not had this relationship with someone. Or am I reading it wrong?
this is a beautiful poem it shows the emptiness of a heartbroken soul. Very Touching. Poetry that pulls the reader in is excellent poetry to me.
I think I have met him. Ha ha. I really liked this poem it was so basic yet it covered all the feelings one could cause another to have. (I think) .
keep writing you have a great talent. And a very good outlook.