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Tainted Heart Houston, Texas / United States, Female, 28
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  • (1/3/2006 2:22:00 PM)

    I do like it, but, throughout the entire poem, you never use the phrase 'I hate you because' until the last line. When, in the last line, you say, 'but most of all, I hate you because' it makes it sound like you've been saying, 'I hate you because' the entire time.

    That might be extremely confusing...but, I hope you understand what I'm getting at.

  • (1/3/2006 2:18:00 PM)

    This is the most god-awful poem I have ever had the displeasure of reading.

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