while i truly like how you deliver your message in a wll thought out story, i have one problem with it. it is mentioned that the santizing of everything reks of communism. the point i wish to make is that the thing most people call communism is not really it at all. true communism is much different from the twisted and distorted version that most people know. that twisted version is mostly fascism disguised as communism. if you look at political ideologies and compare them to the governments of the world, this quickly becomes apparent. i do love the message about censorship tough, plus it definately helps me with a research paper i am doing on it right now.