Right now, you are one of the people I love! I've been having this ongoing fight with the most important person in my life and you just took the words from my mouth - Thank you so much. I try to apologize, but sometimes it's just impossible. Your poem reminded me that no matter the trouble, they're worth it.
I think the words could be expressed a little better, they sometimes seem as if they were just chosen becuase they rhyme? that could be just me. But still a great poem.
What an interesting idea. Quite ambitious to try writing a conversation in rhyme, when there's no defintion of who's whom. And the conversation, twisted and flowing past what they might mean... it made my imagination work full time. A different angle on love.. it made me smile! (and if you knew me, you'd know that's quite the feat)