nicely written with prose-like quality; strong flow and depth. enjoyed. tovli
just had some time to read some more poetry-i like this piece very much-using strong imagery-it teaches the reader how to let go of loss; yet embraces propriety at the same time.
thanks for posting it.
i liked this poem very much-the metaphors are especially well done. it has the innocence of simplicity; yet is complex and sophisticated at the same time.
thanks for the opportunity to read your poetry.