thought this was your best piece for the DB if thats what she is to you now but dont be so hard on yourself. i fear its not the end of you two yet.
This battle's been tooth and nail
It's high time I end this war
You will bow down in my prescence
And I will settle my score
nice stanza here toot and nail thats a wisked combo whered u come up with it. well anywho off to comment R.A.W.
YARRR genius this is prolly my pick out of your new poems im sorry i just think this one was genius in every stanza......