Lydia Henderson's last comments on poems and poets
(5/12/2006 7:22:00 AM)
Not too shabby. You picked an intersting choice in subject matter. The last line doesn't quite go with the first two though. The pen and the black board don't have much to do with each other especially when they're not being compared. ^_^
Nicole, the poem turned out fabulous. I didn't know you had it in you. Keep writting. Try not to be so negative of your own writting. I know it's hard, but try only to be constructively critical. Otherwise, you're telling yourself that it's bad before anyone else has even given an opinion.
Sad how that works. You like, but are never notice. I hate that feeling. Sometimes the best thing is right in front of someone, but they never seem to notice it. They have no idea what they're missing.