Just lettin u know i love it! ! ! it's awesome and i never thought you'd write like that oddly enough. u should write more often~ and by the way...my poem was about i guess basically the fire=ing hell/devil and the man=ing jesus and us thanking God we were alive to live again. hope that makes more since now!
Thanks for your comment but you're poem is beautiful in itself. Just remember to never forget to put YOUR heart in it and not something that you think someone else would want to hear. You're poetry is excellent and I love your way of writing!