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  • POEM: My Orders To A Solider by Brittney Pennington (10/2/2012 12:38:00 AM)

    I like the message in this one. How about making it more personal by relating yourself to the soldier, or describing how brave the soldier is, and contrasting it with the cruelty of war?

  • POEM: What Happens To Smiles by Brittney Pennington (10/2/2012 12:25:00 AM)

    This is a great one, full of rich, original, provocative, entertaining similes. Without mentioning explicitly what you are feeling, you leave the reader wondering about it. Everything looks great except the last line, which is a bit cliche and anticlimatic. If you can rework that it will be perfect.

  • POEM: The Man From Kellogg by Brittney Pennington (10/2/2012 12:15:00 AM)

    This is a really good one. Terse, surreal, amusing and creative. linking the frog with a mysterious person is also great, as it leaves the readers wondering about the connection

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