10 spheres and 22 paths.... you been swotting up on some more alchemy since I've been away? =P
Really like this poem 'specially;
'For you are as one with the ocean as you are with the fire'
You'll be outwriting the Emerald Tablet soon!
I love the way you combine science and religion in this poem. The imagery is beautiful and you manage to make scientific words seem beautiful and poetic. Good work =)