A nice association of the death of a loved one with the waves that come, and go with the sand, taking with it back into the ocean. The feelings are concretely involved.
(5/26/2006 8:50:00 PM)
Cool poem man! Indeed, Jesus suffered for us, and very brutally and mortifyingly at that. Jesus reigns man!
(5/26/2006 8:47:00 PM)
I love this poem! What truth it has! A roller coaster ride has been a cliché used to describe life’s ups and downs, but never why it’s like that, which is what this poem is about, and in a veracious and applauding way. Thumbs up!