What? This makes no sense even as intended humor. Are you trying to imply that people should have big tits and then suffocate themselves with them? I really cannot follow any logic trail in this set of verses. There appears to be an interesting device in there in terms of structure but any idea or concept you're trying to portray otherwise, even as comedy, is completely beyond me. That first verse though applies to a lot of work not a million miles from right here.