I have been reading your poems and they are very emotional, well versed and a joy to read. I think you should keep writing. My only critique is to watch your spelling. I really liked this poem but I was a little thrown at the words ' dual and dark' 'doomed to wonder' and 'without a dout'. It threw the mood off a little and I wondered if you meant: 'dull and dark' doomed to wander' and 'without a doubt'. You are one of the few who can understand the joy of words.: -)
I got a book of Wordsworth when I was 13. This was the first poem in the book. I cried. It has remained my absolute favorate ever since. Almost 30 years later it can still make me cry. The innocense, the since of never losing a loved one because they are still there, in heart, soul and mind. This poem never diminishes its power.