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Latest 5 Poems of Joseph Harskamp

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  • POEM: Snowflakes by Ratana K. Song (2/3/2007 9:47:00 PM)

    ok, here comes some constructive critisism.
    word need more of it. your poem lacks vocabulary. my personal tastes like words. im infatuated with words. if there are to many common words, i grow board...this didnt keep my attention.
    second...WAY to many similies...(direct comparisons) . you need more metaphor (indirect comparisons) . that will add more hidden depth to your poetry.

  • POEM: Apocalypse by Aldo Kraas (2/2/2007 11:20:00 PM)

    this is a pointless piece word repeated. why dont you actually write a poem instead of waste my time.

  • POEM: Apocalypse by Aldo Kraas (10/13/2006 1:24:00 PM)

    very nice. good imagery here. keep it up!

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