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Latest 5 Poems of Joseph Harskamp

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  • POEM: Snowflakes by Ratana K. Song (2/3/2007 9:47:00 PM)

    ok, here comes some constructive critisism.
    word choice...you need more of it. your poem lacks vocabulary. my personal tastes like words. im infatuated with words. if there are to many common words, i grow board...this didnt keep my attention.
    second...WAY to many similies...(direct comparisons) . you need more metaphor (indirect comparisons) . that will add more hidden depth to your poetry.

  • POEM: Apocalypse by Aldo Kraas (2/2/2007 11:20:00 PM)

    this is a pointless piece of...one word repeated. why dont you actually write a poem instead of waste my time.

  • POEM: Apocalypse by Aldo Kraas (10/13/2006 1:24:00 PM)

    very nice. good imagery here. keep it up!

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