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Lucy Simpson Seattle / United States, Female, 47
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  • POEM: Clouds Gathering by Charles Simic (1/4/2008 12:13:00 PM)

    third stanza is a clunker too. I would omit it, if I could.

    Lucy

  • POEM: Clouds Gathering by Charles Simic (1/4/2008 12:12:00 PM)

    I think the poem falters in the second stanza. The first stanza is perfect. The first line of the 2nd stanza is perhaps clunky. I think a metaphor is needed here and not a simile. The last line is striking. The poem isn't perfect in my estimation and I like many of Simic's poems.

    Lucy

  • POEM: Clouds Gathering by Charles Simic (12/31/2007 11:13:00 AM)

    I love the wit of the piece, with it's emotional sucker-punch of a last line. The idea of your best alone, because of an imending scramble for seats is friggin brilliant. I like this plebian sort of poetry.

    Lucy, the plebian

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