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Vaibhav Shah Dungarpur, Rajasthan (In.. / India, Male, 33
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  • POEM: 'Swapping Beauty With Time' by Abha Sharma (6/20/2008 11:34:00 AM)

    Very close to Shakespeare's sonnet 'Like as the Waves' Where he says:
    Nativity, once in the main of light,
    Crawls to maturity, wherewith, being crowned,
    Crooked eclipses 'gainst his glory fight
    And Time that gave, doth now his gift confound.
    Time doth transfix the flourish set on youth,
    And delves the parallels in beauty's brow,
    Feeds on the rarities of natures truth,
    And nothing stands but for his scythe to mow; .........
    This is really a classic poem and a truth which have been acknowledged by all the writers of all the ages.We can not ignore it.A serious philosophical reflection on the themes of time and death.Great work.

  • POEM: Death Perpetrated by C. P. Sharma (5/22/2008 12:50:00 AM)

    The structure of this poem is interesting.Though written in the form of a sonnet, It has a unique rhyme scheme.The emotions are really powerful and insist the readers to think on it.The pink city has been assaulted in such a brutal way that it has left every man in a state of havoc.But I hope that the terrorism is now counting it'slast days.God has decided to annihilate it completely from this world.

  • POEM: Ashvins* by C. P. Sharma (5/22/2008 12:18:00 AM)

    Really a great poem.The whole poem is indianized and giving the freshness of the theme.Saraswati-The Goddess of Knowledge, Indra-The God of Rain are known to the whole world.You have done a fantastic job as it gives us an opportunity to know about Indian Classics in such a pure environment.10\10

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