Mm. I don't know. This was a little bit difficult/confusing for me to read. The first stanza doesn't flow well at all to me. I had to read this a few times to understand it. (I'm only 15, though, so don't worry too much about that one.)
I really liked the third line, though.... The whole poem seems, to me, to have a dreary mood, until maybe the last few lines.
I think this poem's alright but not easy to read for someone like me. Don't worry too much about my opinion, though.
I love it! >.< 'a Jekyll or Hyde, a high or low tide, the succeeds or the fails, a heads or a tails'. 'Two contrasting men, you may think, but a man chooses his path, just as quick as he blinks.' Fabulous. ^o^