the imagery is awsome i can totally picture what you are describing. in stanza four you could replace peeps with peek. if you want to, just a thought.
great poem =)
thats a very nice poem, and i can see it is a subject you feel strongly about. it is great to express the things you care about in a way that is not totally reveling but still helps.
keep it up =)
that is very nice, i like how the earth is the creater. very nice =)