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Luis Estable Oriente / Cuba, Male, 59
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Latest 5 Poems of Luis Estable

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  • POEM: Quite Bad by Marilyn Jean (1/4/2017 6:49:00 PM)

    There is a confusion here with this: You write lets finish, but I think this should be let us or let`s finish. To whom the speaker is talking to here, I do not see. There are other problems here like the lack of punctuation to make the break of the line clear. Nice effort though.

    Luis A. Estable

  • POEM: Little Dream by marty webb (1/4/2017 6:40:00 PM)

    Sleep little dream does not do it for me, and need more diction here to get to the bottom of it or this. We usually don`t talk of a dream going to sleep in the way that you put it here.

    Yes, the language is poetic, but one, sometimes, can use poetic words without the poem being good. Poetic language alone does not do it at times.

    I think you can give us here more than just that little dream and what comes with it. But nice try

    Luis A. Estable

  • POEM: To My Little Silver Mine (Senryu) by Dagesh .1theappleofmyfathersi (1/4/2017 6:28:00 PM)

    This is good and I take it to mean: Should I stay in my good house and search for a mansion?
    The speaker is well there where he or she is but wonder for more.

    We all have done it at one time or another. Should I be content with this, or should I try to get that?

    The compact diction says a lot.

    Thanks,

    Luis A. Estable

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