You should not have mentioned it here, as it makes one read the poem already with a mind set on the emotion the following lines might deliver.
Well, anyways, your honest expressions within this economy of expression has its go. them images and expressions are corresponding and complementing, thats what comfortably conveys the cadence of emotions. Not necessarily you compose feelings of loss, pain, misfortune or calamities on the word-canvass of dreadful despondency, it can too be on notes of promises and promptness of others' passions. Keep penning sensibly wonderful poems, this will eliminate the inner soul's craving for sympathy and empathy. This is the psycho analysis of this piece of poetry and the poet within my present mind set. Regards.
As you have noticed here, it took ages to have someone to look at this, and that too, a soul like You to dare to hold the golden string of time to wards the endless journey, which in fact is a kind of amazing blessing and mercy of our friend and fellow poet; 'soulful heart', who during one of our message exchanges showed her willingness, rather enthusiastic endeavor to translate my English version The Time Tree, which is one of my old postings in here. With all humility and gratitude, i submit my love and respect to her and you in all the sense for having made me feel proud of my beauty making at this loftiness, alhamdulillah. Gratitude immense to you both again. Your courage, courtesy and kindness reminds me of one of the old legends of the Indian mythology, where Ahaly gets salvation in dwapara yuga, by the touch of Lord SreeRam. Yes, took time, but turned good.. yes, you have, thanx to God, given salvation to this poem by all means. Its like a million eyes have read and applauded, appreciated and rewarded. I hold the invaluable glittering trophy, your words of appreciation, in my hand, and as a prism it emits amazing million colored rays around the world of poetic achievements ever. As I used to teach students of the many Award-won men of letters of this globe, i used to secretly dream of a day, and i think you have made me feel the pilot passion. Ah.. subhanAllah. May God bless you with all the best of naema, amin. So much love and regards.
owing to the perennial permeation of powerful thoughts within, of the burning issues of racism, and inequalities and insecurities the beauty of this lil planet has often suffered much, and in a multi dimensional issue, the blessed bard has proclaimed the gravity of this issue in a very plane, but powerful manner. Cheers.